A new song I’m working on

Sounds like your first attempt at writing a Piano Man (song talking about random people in their town & what they're doing). Cheesy/forced lyrics (initially thought this was made to make fun of those songs). Melody's familiar but can't put my finger on it. I sense more potential.

I like where you're going. I think I'd cut some words to make it flow easier. Maybe look at the logic of hearing the 'next' poem 'again.' Keep it going.

All I Knew is out now with a music video

Less words more composition?

You are awesome

Awesome!!

Great song. A new timeless classic @oakridgeboys She would be great as an opener for you.

Beautiful voice lyrics too

I rally like this one! Did you cut a record yet?

That's badass, keep it up

Nice song. Pleasant melody. Great lyrics. Phenomenal theme. 🙂