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Jordan Peterson explains the process for perfecting your essay. Elevate your writing and boost your grades this year at Use promo code BACK2SCHOOL to receive a 40% discount on monthly and yearly subscriptions. Sign up to Essay:
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@jordanbpeterson, some feedback based on your own advice here: "At least 15 to 20 percent" means "at least 15 percent."

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It’s hard to trim an essay when you are already struggling to fill the required page count 😩 Great advice though!

Why isn't this part of #PetersonAcademy???

The code already expired? Not cool.

@jordanbpeterson I wish I had this several years ago when doing a college writing course

@jordanbpeterson Not cool at all..

The guy can't even read nietzsche properly.

"The code has expired."

Jordan’s piece here could deliver the same meaning more clearly and in far fewer words.

One thing I learned to do was give a subtitle (1-3 words typically) to my paragraphs (removed before the finished published piece). It made it easier to find amongst the wall of text. And it helped to hone in on exactly what that paragraph was about.

