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swifties when ariana doesn’t write it like "the boy is unequivocally mine, i await to try his depths. the boy is assuredly mine, observe as i luxuriously savor the moment of my deepest ludt and gluttony"
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when she says “hung all my clothes in the closet” instead of “i drew up my linen attire in the armoire situated in the dark neck of my bohemian bedroom”

this is a hit tweet in the making! i need them to realize that repetition, much like metaphors, is a literary device that can be used in songs. not everything needs to sound straight out of shakespeare 😭

like big words ≠ good songwriting.. the writing on es is literally great because it works so well in the music. they’re SONGS, but not everyone’s fav can actually SING or produce their own vocals so i get why they’re confused

You don’t have to speak in 1600 old English to write a good song LMFAO

where taylor searchs for lyrics to her songs:

To be honest and to quote my literature professor : "Simplicity is key. Otherwise, it's what we call literary pounderousness"

the overusing of passive voice, wordy, trying to stretch out an expression when you can just say it in a few words, not everything has to be thesaurus deep words..this aint a spoken poetry competitio n

girl how did you 😂😂😭😭😭😭

i dont wanna hate on taylor but this made me cackle 😭

LMFAOOOP EXACTLY, they think adding fancy words to a line automatically makes it “good song writing” like grow up

