Yay or nay?

It’s a yes for me yuh haffy can see the vision

She's been doing the for a while now and it's obvious that talent is there but little guidance in her writing is needed. She is trying to pack the verses with too much punch and lyrics, need fi simma down the verses and mek it flow that's the reason she a run out of breath

She cute & get a diff instrumental

It needs a better beat. This ain't it

Nope. It’s terrible .

Nay She’s not shen but the image is there thou

She have potential

I don't understand the context 😕